I make a pretty damn good sounding board and if something is "off" (ie it makes me blink funny, go into reverse, pass gas, whatever) I pay attention to it.
Sounds as though you have the grammar, punctuation and style under control - you just need to know if what you're writing is WORKING, right?
If you're interested you can PM me or write at brynnamorgan dot livejournal dot com, etc....
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Date: 2008-07-12 01:16 am (UTC)I make a pretty damn good sounding board and if something is "off" (ie it makes me blink funny, go into reverse, pass gas, whatever) I pay attention to it.
Sounds as though you have the grammar, punctuation and style under control - you just need to know if what you're writing is WORKING, right?
If you're interested you can PM me or write at brynnamorgan dot livejournal dot com, etc....