The wording on the first is almost dominating the picture, but the non-text one is too blank without it. If you could find some middle ground between the two, maybe by lightening up the text a bit, I think it'd make it better.
Overall. Text version definitely, if only because you used lyrics from one of the best bands ever. ;)
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Date: 2007-03-16 04:29 am (UTC)Overall. Text version definitely, if only because you used lyrics from one of the best bands ever. ;)