fic req & beta req

[fleurione.livejournal.com]

HI! I have two requests!

Firstly; a fic in which House and Wilson are trying to have first-time penetrative sex but it keeps failing, I think it was Wilson's suggestion they do it and House is reluctant. The first time House makes some comment about 'shit' and it really kills Wilson's mood, another time it's all just uncomfortable and unpleasant, possibly one of the times is full of bad innuendo (something about ram your hot rod up my track?) and eventually 'the full-fledged gay sex gets better' or similar?

Secondly; I would love a beta reader - someone to go over a few short starter-pieces I have and either offer suggestions on where to go from here on, or advise whether they can stand alone as one-shots. And also tell me if my sentences are too long, and the flow of the pieces are okay. Genres: H/W (obv.) pre-slash, friendship, UST, mostly kinda angsty, and a sick!Wilson thrown in for good measure.

Thankyou in advance!

Comments

[fleurione.livejournal.com]

amazing how you guys manage to untangle the twist of two fics that I remembered, to tell me which the individual ones are! This was the rest of it, thankyou!

[half-a-night.livejournal.com]

Glad to have helped you ;)