Beta Reader?

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Hello - I've been (unsuccessfully) looking for a beta for a completed piece and someone pointed me in this direction, so I hope it's the right place!  The fic is a quiet House/Wilson friendship story just shy of 5,000 words.  I feel fairly confident about the grammar and mechanics (not that a second set of eyes wouldn't help), but I'd like someone to double check for pacing and characterization.  If you're willing to help me out, leave a comment or send a private message.  Thanks for your consideration!