[identity profile] the-bouo.livejournal.com
Anyone want to help me out a bit? I have this totally tentative first fic that I'm working on (going to be stupidly short and probably fairly pointless) shouldn't take anyone more than a couple of minutes to read and dismiss (as garbage). Is anyone interested in humouring me?

It's just one of those 'first time' probably terribly OFC... hey what can I say, I have no idea what I'm doing. It's like handing a monkey a (broken) typewriter and expecting, well, words instead of ink stains.

Apparently I'm terrible at self-promotion. But that's okay isn't it?
 


[identity profile] little-missmimi.livejournal.com
 So, I have these two plot bunnies (which can be found below the cut) that need to be developed, and I'd like to try something different. In the past, I've only used a beta when my fic is done or half-done, but I'm looking to have one through various drafts and development points.
plot bunnies are coming to attack if you click this )

Beta?

Feb. 28th, 2009 02:26 am
[identity profile] shara-i.livejournal.com
Would anyone be interested in betaing a ~2000 word House/Wilson fic? It's NC-17 and a basically happy fic, but umm I've gone a little crazy with all the metaphors and things and wanted some help looking through it. Many cookies and thanks offered in return!
[identity profile] indigo-scimitar.livejournal.com
I'm in need of a beta for a rough draft of mine (and I mean, REALLY rough draft...srs bsns here). I wrote it a while ago for a prompt that's due in a week (!) and I can't seem to wrap my mind around revising it. Too many things aren't clicking, aren't making sense...so if someone could help me rework it a bit (nothing major, just tweaking it so it's a bit more in character and whatnot), it would be awesome and greatly appreciated. I only have til next Tuesday >.>

The fic's H/W, along the lines of NC-17, but it's more...not so much smut as...smut being described...if you know what I mean.

If anyone is up to the task, drop me a line.

Please and thanks :)
[identity profile] seschat.livejournal.com

Hello, lovely people!

I'm doing NaNoWriMo and I'd like to read some childhood!House fics to see how other authors approached the subject (even though I write in German).

Pretty please, help, I need to write FASTER. 

PS.: Does anyone know some Japanse? Could I message you? I don't know yet, but I might need some help. *panics*
 

[identity profile] hilson08.livejournal.com
Anyone here who would like to beta a mpreg story (House / Wilson)? I´d be forever grateful!
[identity profile] bohemian815.livejournal.com
Hello! It’s been a while since I’ve used this comm, but I’m pretty sure this is kosher and if not Mods please feel free to delete this.

As of late I have been writing an extremely large and time consuming AU, and it doesn’t really seem to have an end in sight. I was wondering if any of you kind people out there could Beta for me. I’m looking for a really hands on beta, as there’s still a lot of work that needs to go into the story, and I’m really hoping that I could get someone with enough free time on their hands to help me out. I would be forever grateful!

Thank you in advance for any help, please just drop me a comment.

-B815
[identity profile] kirili.livejournal.com
HAI.

Is there anybody out there who wouldn't mind helping me out by beta'ing a 1,600 word (ish) ficlette?

The favour would be returned with much enthusiam.

And cookies. Plenty of cookies. And useless crap like love and hugs and snuffles.
[identity profile] la-localfreak.livejournal.com
Hello. I've been working on a small fic for months, I kept it all rather under my hat as I am not known for finishing fic well...ever! But I'm happy to say that at last I have it up to second-draft standard.

It's a little over 7000 words and is a vaguely crack-y (but not overly so) crossover with My Best Friend's A Vampire or, at least, it absorbs the events in that film as part of WIlson's canon. I actually got into House because I saw that film, believe it or not!

It's not slash (though if I ever write sequels I might lean towards it) but it's mostly House-Wilson interaction, hence why I'm asking on here. I'd really love a beta reader looking, chiefly, at my use of Americanisms (though having someone going over my grammar and spelling is always helpful, of course) as I'm from the UK and know all too well of the cultural-language differences. Anyway I could really use someone who'd be willing to go over it and make sure none of the characters say anything embarrasingly British (and, ergo, OOC). Also, at present, it doesn't have a title so suggestions on that side would also be appreciated.

If you're interested, just leave a comment :). Thanks!
[identity profile] nemesishamartia.livejournal.com
1 -- I'd like a beta in general. Just someone I can send all sorts of fics to at any time (I'm not particularly impatient, though, so if you have a slower turnaround time than most, that's fine).
2 -- Grammar runs really isn't what I need -- yeah, it's helpful to have someone triple-check me, but I taught ESL, I'm a WTP submissions mod, and I MST, so I catch most of my mistakes without any difficulty. What I *really* need is someone who keeps my story focused and tight, because on my own, I'd be perfectly capable of adding all sorts of useless stuff. Basically, if the story sucks, I wanna know.
3 -- Be as mean as you want, I'm not thin-skinned.
4 -- The more detailed you are, the happier I am. I love detailed comments; it helps me know what's good and what's bad.

Wow. I know that's a lot to ask, but even if you can't do all of that, any help would be great. Especially the whole sounding board thing. Basically, that's me with a bunch of ideas going... "Does this WORK?"

Right. A general description of what I write: 99% of it is House/Wilson (occasionally, something else totally out of left field comes. If it's not House/Wilson, I'll tell you the pairing beforehand). Usually it is humorous (at least, I like to think so) and plausibly cute (I do not have House whispering tender nothings in Wilson's ear, I do have him occasionally doing the dishes). I have a lot of shorter fics and a lot of longerfics I'm working on. I prefer to send fics over while I'm working on them to see if they work and to get an idea which direction the fic should go.

Many thanks! (just reply if you're interested)
[identity profile] lynnafer.livejournal.com
I posted this over at [profile] housefic_beta but I thought more people might see it here and I'm desperate for help.

So I've started writting a somewhat epic apocalypse type fic. I have most of the story mapped out and I know where I want to go, I just need some help getting there. Anyone interested in maybe co-authoring this beast with me? I have about 7000 words typed up (I've been writing on actual paper!) and 10000 words written total and haven't even gotten to the good stuff. It's a H/W friendship-possibly more if I can make up my mind fic set during an Influenza pandemic. It is very rough right now, but if anyone wants to take a look at it and make some suggestions I'd be very appreciative. Comment or email me at lynnafer82@hotmail.com.

Thanks a bunch.

 

[identity profile] youngfreak92.livejournal.com
I'm writing a first-time-House-met-Wilson kind of fic, although it's slightly AU. It's a plot-bunny I adopted from [personal profile] lostwiginity, who wrote: "For a long time now I had this idea in my head of Wilson knowing House via Wilson's father, who's a professor at wherever House went to study medicine. And when House gets kicked out of the dorm (because, well, he's House), he stays over at the Wilsons' home on the couch, because Wilson senior actually likes that young cheeky bastard student of his."

Now, the fic takes place during 1981, and since it follows the teenage-novel format (hopefully without all the trite cliches) the atmopshere is very important. The problem is that I wasn't even a twinkle in my parents eyes during '81. Are there anyone out there that was a teenager during the early eightes and think that they could help me beta/alpha that part of the fic? It would also be lovely and awesome if someone could help me with the Jewish aspect too.

As far as fic-warnings go, the story includes precocious!jailbait!Wilson, college!House, a possibly one-sided crush and a rating that is between PG-13 and R. If you're fine with that, and feel that you would like to beta, please send an e-mail to
youngfreak92@hotmail.com.

Thanks in advance.
[identity profile] oldblue.livejournal.com
Hey folks!

About a million years ago, I posted here asking for help with a little House/Wilson porn scene. I got a lot of very nice, very helpful replies and the porn was much improved... I think. So, thanks for that :)  Well, that story has grown monstrous and pretty much eaten my brain, but it's mostly done. So now I'm looking for a beta (or betas) to beat it into submission. Unfortunately, I killed all my old e-mail addresses, and with it, the names of the very sweet people who offered to beta for me earlier.

Would anyone mind taking a look at this thing? The relevant info: It's around 8,000 words, NC-17, mostly H/W, but also H/Cuddy, with hints of H/W/C; a little on the cracky side, with mild House angst. Takes place in season 4, but there are no real spoilers beyond the new characters.

It needs a fairly thorough beta - there are some plot issues, probably some characterization issues, etc. You can be as harsh as you like - I can take it  ;)

If you're interested, please drop me a line at bluefootedb at gmail dot com or send me a message on LJ or leave a comment here and I'll send you the word file. Any and all help would be greatly appreciated.

 
[identity profile] bananachips.livejournal.com
I have a short and shameless House/Wilson/Amber PWP that wants a-beta'in. Help a girl out! Here's a snippet:

Wilson gulped. “I’m not sure this is a good idea.”

Amber, mouthing House’s neck, couldn’t answer, so House did. “Which must mean that it is-- jesus, woman, how much foreplay do you need?”

She pulled her head away and grinned wickedly. “Just enough to drive you insane.”

“Already
am,” House groaned.

“Nope, you’re still coherent,” she said before applying her mouth to him again, this time over a nipple, biting it around the rim. Wilson’s didn’t know what to do with himself.


Cookies and hugs and love promised in return!
[identity profile] lostwiginity.livejournal.com
I know this is a long reach but...

Is there anyone with Japanese reading skills who is capable of translating a 24-paged House/Wilson comic book into English?
[identity profile] edwindean.livejournal.com
Hello, I am currently writing and I am seeking medical beta. The story itself is nearly finished and the prose is coming along. I am, however, missing that all important aspect of the details of the story's patient of the week.

If you have medical knowledge in the areas of how depression and stress do and do not affect certain diseases, that would be peachy. You can email me (cadburybutton@yahoo.co.uk), or comment with an email I can reach you at. The more opinions, anecdotes, ideas and such the better, especially as I am hitting an odd wall in the scientific aspects of my writing.

I will also shortly require a beta, mainly for catching any words I may have left out due to dyslexia. It is a longer story, probably in the area of 20 000 words, though this is the vaguest of estimates. Otherwise, an eye for flow and consistency would be a plus. Email or comment if you are interested.

Thank you,
Edwin Dean
[identity profile] bananacosmic.livejournal.com
I'm currently writing my first slightly longer House-fic. It will be House/Wilson slash, taking off after "Don't Ever Change". At the moment, it's 7001 words long, rated PG-13 for language, and it'll be a bit longer before it's finished. There's some Wilson/Amber too, because the plot of the story is that CTB gets pregnant.

I need someone to check their personalities mostly :) Grammar and spelling too, of course, 'cause that's always needed, but mostly IC-check and story suggestions. I don't mind harsh betaing ^^ I want to put a good story out there.

I also have two short one-shots that would need betaing, both House/Wilson, so if you're interested in something shorter... but mostly the longer fic described above.

Contact me by email (bananacosmicgirl at hotmail.com) if you're interested (please write 'Betaing' or some such in the subject, 'cause it'll go in the junk mail and I don't want to miss it). Other stories I've written can be found on my website, if you want to get an idea of what/how I write - mostly Harry Potter.
[identity profile] youngfreak92.livejournal.com

Ever since I read the essay about the theory of there being two Wilsons in the universe of House MD – one real, the other one a figment of House’s imagination – back in December/January, I’ve been little by little planning on a fanfiction concerning that subject.  A while ago I finally pulled myself together and started writing on it, but I didn’t get any further than a small bit of the beginning before I realized there was no way I am going to be able to pull this off alone.
So, now I’m asking for help. I need an alpha that is serious about writing and good at constructive criticism. I also need to bounce ideas back and forth, and I would appreciate pretty quick answers to the e-mails (i.e. less than a week’s wait). The story in question will surely be longer than 10,000 words, and it wouldn't surprise me if it became longer than 20,000.
If anyone think they can help, or if you want to read the draft (2,500 words give or take), or if you want to know the outline of the story, you can contact me at
youngfreak92@hotmail.com.
Thanks in advance.

(If this is not a good place to post this, just point me out a better direction for me and I will delete this post)

[identity profile] oldblue.livejournal.com
Hey folks.

I am stuck - seriously damn stuck - on a sex scene. I've been doing nothing but changing the same words around for about two days now. Mostly, I feel like I'm treading old ground here, and I'm just plain out of ideas. It reads like a generic, blue-label slash scene right now. So I'm basically looking for someone to take a quick read-through and maybe breathe a little new life into things.

Some background:
This is for get_house_laid, it will eventually be H/W, H/Cuddy, and H/W/C. The scene in question is just H/W and is NC-17, and involves House being slightly submissive to Wilson. There are some bits that haven't been written in yet because they feel so trite to me right now.

Basically, I'm looking for any way to spice it up a little or for any other crits. If you're interested, either post here or just e-mail me at bluefootedb [at] gmail [dot] com and I'll send it on over. Please be harsh.

And this post is now probably longer than the scene ;) Thanks in advance!

ETA: Thanks for all the help I've gotten! Now I just have to write this damn thing ;)

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